10+8E+Deep+End

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by Dana

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[|Deep End Animoto- by Coby] media type="custom" key="7245927" Book title: Deep End Author: Sam Hutton Category: Thrill This book is about: maddie cooper and alex cox who go undercover to catch a diamond thief. Grace O’connor- daughter or millionaire Patrick O’connor, stole diamonds out of her dads safe and fled from America to England with her friend henry and the diamonds. It was then henry’s plan to take the diamonds, sell them to Richard Bryson and flee to Scotland. Maddie impersonates grace and is later kidnapped along with alex. The book concludes in a helicopter crash. What is the best thing in this book? The action and danger What is the worst thing about this book? It’s a little confusing in places You might like this book if you also enjoyed stormbreaker and point blanc. I rate this book 3/5 By coby bibliography: for coby's animoto and pics below [|www.bartsbookshop.co.uk] [|www.fantasticfiction.co.uk] [|www.uncyclopedia.wikia.com] [|www.worldatlas.com] see sites above for references

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Alternative ending, Deep End By Dana That day Eddie Stone would be coming to pick Henry and Grace O’Conner, little did he know that grace and Henry were still at the airport being held there until it was safe to go back. Maddie lay in her room waiting for Eddie stone to find out to come. She had been up all night thinking of possibilities about what Eddie stone might do to her. One question that was floating around in her head was: was Eddie stone the one that killed her mother? That’s all she wanted to know but why would he want grace O'Conner? Wouldn’t it just be easier to talk to Patrick O'Conner? But no they had to kidnap grace O’Conner and hold her there. Sitting in the room next to Maddie’s was Alex he was strapped to the bed. They had found the wire he had been holding and he was now in big trouble. He got Maddie in trouble too she was interrogated but Alex got worse Maddie felt bad for pulling Alex with her to do this she didn’t expect to have to do this she was scared and alone she didn’t have anyone to talk to all she had were her thoughts and the moonlight at night but that wasn’t enough Maddie wanted nothing more then to by out of this place and be with her father who was probably worried sick about her. She only hoped Danny would be alright when he came with backup.

* * That morning Danny's van was trashed when he got back to it. Everything nothing was spared. Why did he have to be so hungry? He looked around to see if anything was alright when he stood on something hard and broken. He looked down and there was his only way of contacting PIC. His phone was smashed beyond repair. Everything else Danny saw was broken beyond repair. Whoever did this knew what they were doing. Then an idea hit Danny the royal mail delivery van. *** Alex woke with a start he heard someone scream then fall to the ground. All he hoped was that it was not Maddie that that happened to. He would never live that down, superintendent jack cooper would not let anything happen to Maddie but if Alex were the one to be looking after her at the time Alex would surely loose his job. He tired to get up but it was worthless there was no way that he could untie himself before anything else happened.
 * Meanwhile Alex was in the next room thinking pretty much the same thing but he was wondering how Maddie was holding up in the next room. He hoped Danny would get here quickly so at least Maddie would be safe superintendent jack cooper would never forgive Alex if he lost his only daughter to stonecor. He couldn’t even begin to think about what DCS cooper might do to him. They weren’t even meant to be on this mission but Maddie insisted and now they were sitting in a house in the middle of nowhere waiting for someone who might never come. He did have faith in Danny he was just wondering if Danny could even find them. He just hoped that they would all get out safely and find Maddie’s mothers killer so they could put him behind bars for the rest of his life. One question that was flowing in his mind was: what would Eddie stone do to Maddie when he found out that she was jack coopers daughter? What would he do to Alex when he found out they were working for PIC? How will he react? What will happen? All these questions were floating around in Alex’s head. He didn’t even want to think about what might happen to Maddie so he pushed that thought out of his mind and tried to get some sleep before Eddie stone got there the next morning. Putting his head on the pillow he fell into a restless sleep. **

To be continued……